Monday, October 8, 2012

Three countries I chose for the interview


Since there are more than half the numbers of my classmates are international students and I am counted as one. I personally want to know more about some countries where the other come from as well as the United States. Hopefully, after the interview, I will get to know more about some other people and cultures. From that I could see the differences between my home country and the other countries as well as get a chance to learn what I haven’t taught in my country. I have chosen and took a brief look at three countries that I feel interested in the most. They are South Korea, Bangladesh, and the United States.  
Firstly, let’s take a look at South Korea, the country I personally feel the most interested in among the other two as well as all of the other countries. I’ve been admiring this country’s development in technology, fashion as well as its customs. South Korea is a beautiful country located in Eastern Asia with its capital Seoul and a population of 48,598,175 (1). In general, there are four aspects which are significant in the Korean society and culture concept: Korean family values, Confucianism, ancestors, and the concept of Kibun. As what I have been informed, Korean life style is somewhat similar to my home lifestyle but obviously, Korean still has their own distinct and unique culture. I will focus on those four aspects interviewing my classmates.

Next country I will interview about is Bangladesh, another interesting country located in Southern Asia. Bangladesh has a population of 144,319,628 (2) and the capital Dhaka. The reason why I chose Bangladesh is because I have got to know quite many Bangladesh friends but have not really known much about this country. After researching some resources, I get a conclude that there will be three main points of the Bangladesh culture and society concept that I want to mention in the interview. They are hierarchy, religion and festival. Besides, I will also interview about the customs and etiquette in Bangladesh.

Lastly, as an international student studying in the United States, there are so much more I want to know about the people, American way of living, and education systems beside what I have got to known. Due to its development in education and economic, America has been always the hottest place for immigration. Its population until 2007 was 301,139,947 (3) which is a huge number. From what I have been experiencing and researching, there are three obvious words about American society and culture: "Diversity", "informal and friendly", and "time is money". I definitely have a lot to ask about, not only the America culture but also the way my American interviewee view his/her home country people and life.

Those above are the countries I feel interested in and curious to know more about. Hopefully by interviewing some people in the class, I will achieve my objectives which are know more about cultures and people in other countries, know how the interviewees view their culture personally, be able to conclude some differences between my home country and the other countries, get a chance to learn what I haven’t taught in my home country, and most important, get to know more about the interviewees as my classmates.

Bibliography:
(1): "Kwintessential." South Korea - Language, Culture, Customs and Etiquette. N.p., n.d. Web. 8 Oct 2012. http://www.kwintessential.co.uk/resources/global-etiquette/south-korea-country-profile.html.
(2):  "Kwintessential." Bangladesh - Language, Culture, Customs and Etiquette. N.p., n.d. Web. 8 Oct 2012. <http://www.kwintessential.co.uk/resources/global-etiquette/bangladesh.html>.
(3): "Kwintessential." USA - Language, Culture, Customs and Etiquette. N.p., n.d. Web. 8 Oct 2012. <http://www.kwintessential.co.uk/resources/global-etiquette/usa.html>.
 

 

 

 

Monday, October 1, 2012

Five other books chosen by my classmates

       1. The first book that I chose from the other posts is The Best of London by Henri Gault and Christian Millau that had chosen by Sun, YiHao. The book is a list of every popular places in London for every purposes and all hierarchies. The descriptions of the places draw a general picture of London's way of living. "The seedy, cosmopolitan streets of Bayswater are redolet with fragrant charcoal grills, but more often than not these mouth-watering smells come from handfuls of herbs thrown on hot coals and not from the cooking, which is usually uniform and poor". This is an introduction of Fournaki Restaurant, a restaurant in Bayswater for greek. "The best of London" is printed by Crown Publishers and The Knapp Press in New York in 1982.       
       
       2. Gods of Commerce: How Business Really Works by Michael Phillips chosen by Tolan, Curtis F  is about business fields which contains trade, industry, and clientry. The book generally defines those fields of business and gives the audience an idea of the way business works. "Stability, economic, legal, social, and physical, is what permits a tradesperson to plan and allows a business to thrive over time". Obviously, the quote states the matters of business and from that gives some senses of what is in the business term. This book is printed by Clear Glass Press in San Francisco in 1997. 
       
       3. The Development of Memory in Children by Robert Kail chosen by Hyun, HanSole is a psychology book which informs the audience with a knowledge of memory development. The book is based on researches on childrens. Reading this book helps people to understand more about the way people memmorize and what affects this process such as age and gender. "One simple way in which the age groups differed was in the number of ways they suggested of trying to remember the birthday party: The older children were considerably more resourceful, suggesting an average of 2.5 ways of remembering the party compared to 1.35 for the kindergarten children". The book is printed by W.H. Freeman and Company in New York in 1979.
      
       4. Malaysia by T.E. Smith and John Bastin chosen by Phung, Trang T is about Malaysian custom and culture in general. The book inform the audience with the creation of Malaysia. On the other hand, it refers to Malaysian lives nowadays and in the past at the same time; from that it pictures the way of lives and social problems in Malaysia. "One of the precarious aspects of the problem of finding jobs for the increasing labour-force is that the Malaysian economy is still very independent on producing and exporting rubber". "Malaysia" is printed by Headley Brothers LTD in London, Great Britain in 1967.
       
       5. A technique for producing ideas by James Webb Young chosen by Jamaa, Abdalle M  is about producing ideas process by experiences of communicating. It's also about creative thingking. The book was printed by Crain Books in Chicago in 1975. "This has brought me to the conclusion that the production of ideas is just as definite a process as the production of Fords; that the production of ideas, too, runs on an assembly line; that in this production the mind follows an operative technique which can be learned and controlled; and that its effective ise is just as much a matter of practive in the technique as is the effective use of any tool". Indeed, this quote gives the audience an idea of how "the production of ideas" is defined.
 
      Bibliographies:
      1. The Best Of London,1982, Henri Gault & Christian Millau, New York. 
      2. Gods of Commerce: How Business Really Works,1997, Michael Phillips, San Francisco.
      3. The Development of Memory in Children, 1979, Robert Kail, New York.
      4. Malaysia, 1967, T.E. Smith & John Bastin, London.
      5. A technique for producing ideas, 1975, James Webb Young, Chicago.
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Monday, September 24, 2012

I picked a book from the library

Step 1: Answer questions

1. Why did you select the book you brought to class?
- The book that I chose caught my attention at first because it's a small, pretty, and new looking book. and then I saw the name and felt interested in it.
2. How many authors does it have?
- There is one author.
3. What is the title?
- Thailand
4. Who printed the book?
- The book was first printed by Kuperard, then was distributed by Random House Distribution Services
5. Which city was it printed in, and when?
- The book at first was printed by Kuperard in Great Britain in 2003, then was distributed by Random House Distribution Services in the United States and Canada. The book is also printed in Malaisia.

Step 2: Providing the same information as asked above, write a coherent paragraph about the book you selected. Pick a quote from the book and incorporate it into your text. Provide full bibliographical information at the end in a "Works cited" portion of your post.

The book "Thailand" by Roger Jones caught my attention at first because it is a small, pretty, and new looking book. And then when I read the name of the book, I felt interested in reading it. "Thailand" has complicated information since it is about a country outside of the United States, Thailand. the book was printed the first time by Kuperard in Great Britain in 2003. And then it was distributed by Random House Distribution Services in the United States and Canada. The book is also printed in Malaisia. The book is about the customs and culture of Thailand. At the first line of the introduction, "To most outsiders Thailand represents the East at its most mysterious and enigmatic" (Jones 8), the author states a general information of the book.

Work cited:
Jones, Roger. Thailand. Great Britain, United States, Canada: Kuperard, Random House Distribution Services, 2003.






















How my group organized the presentation on "My native language is not English".


                                                                                                           Participants: Quyen Tran
                                                                                                                                Utku Hasbay

As an international student, each of us in the group has a problem about English language since our native language is not English. We have been realized that we still struggle each time writing an essay because there is still something confusing us. And then when looking at LEO website, the topic “My native language is not English” immediately caught our eyes. Each of us chose the most confuse part in the topic to research more about and prepared for the presentation in class. I was confused distinguish count and non-count nouns. On the other hand, Utku had problem using transactions in an essay, so all sentences seem to sound the same. After individually research about our own part, we made our group in class and started organizing our group presentation.
Firstly, each of us would work on our own part. About me, I first read the definitions of count and non-count nouns on LEO. I figured a lot out but still got a little confused in general due to the format of LEO is a little bit hard to read and organize every parts together in my mind. Therefore, I researched some more websites on Google. The most useful website that I found is www.learnamericanenglishonline.com. This website displays a lot of pictures and tables which is much easier for me to see the differences between count and non-count nouns by looking at the tables and example pictures. My mind was informed a lot after reading and researching about the topic. I now can smoothly distinguish count and non-count nouns, so that my writing skill would improve considerable.
About Utku, after we had discussed about the processes of our work, I got the ideal how Utku organized his work. First, he started to write his part of our group work. He used examples from LEO website to make his statement more clear. His goal was putting emphasize on the importance of transition words. How essays look like without them? What are their functions in papers? Those were the couple questions that he tried to give answer on his work.
When had finished working on our own part, we decided to put the individual parts into one page in order to present our topic. As agreement, Utku supposed to write the conclusion as  I would write the introduction. We tried to make the group presentation page looks seamless by using transactions. Since we were done working on our group work, Utku and me assigned each other the parts that we are going to present in front of the class and kept practicing at last.
In conclusion, after taking a look from the resources we had read, we have got to know the way to fix those problems we had got. More important, by group working, I not only figured out a lot about my problem but also understand more about the problem the other group member got. This would help me even improve more in writing skill.  I now know how to distinguish count and non-count nouns, and know how to avoid making all sentences looking the same as well thanks to this helpful group working. 
 


Monday, September 17, 2012

LEO Presentation - My Native Language is not English (The second draft)


Utku Hasbay

Quyen Tran

Our native language is not English

            Due to the same situation which is we are International students, today we are going to talk about the problems we get when writing an essay, since our native language is not English. If you are an international student, you might get the same confused as we do. There are two aspects that we get trouble with the most. The first one is the differences between count and noncount nouns, and the second one is that all sentences sound the same in a paragraph.

            First, we are going to distinguish count and noncount nouns. After we had understood about these differences, we will be able to use the noun plural ending -s correctly and use words that express quantities, such as little, much, . . . Knowing how to use count and noncount nouns will make it sounds much better while speaking and make essays look perfectly corrected.

What is the definition of count and noncount nouns?

Count nouns:  count nouns use singular and plural verbs and pronouns”. (1)

A count noun have the –s at the end if it’s plural.

Example: car, table, orange, television

-          The is a car in the garage./ There are five cars on the road.

-          How many cars are there?

Noncount nouns: “noncount nouns use only singular verbs and pronouns”. (2)

Example: traffic, furniture, fruit, video equipment

-          There is some fruit on the table.

-          How much fruit do we have?

 

Special case: There are some nouns which are used with both functions count and noncount: fruit(s), wine(s), food(s), drink(s), coffee(s).  Usually, it happens when using words with food and beverages.

Example: Some types of Vietnamese fruits are starting to be grown in America fields.

             Next, we will talk about the way to use transitions in an essay, so that the essay will flow smoothly and all the sentences do not sound the same. As an international student I have a hard time with writing fluent English papers. When I review my papers and try to compare them with the “perfect” ones. I realized that I don’t know how to use transition words such as furthermore, and, so, because, but, nor, where, which. Lacking of using transition words my sentences usually sound like, I am emphasizing same points. So this problem bothers the reader and my papers are far from being fluent. Let me give some examples that I took from Leo:

 

Original
The two countries reached an agreement on trade policies. They then were able to complete their peace treaty.
Revision
After the two countries reached an agreement on trade policies, they were able to complete their peace treaty.

 

EX 1* (3)

 

Original
The program's format allows individual users to make changes. This can be done each time users encounter problems in implementing the program.
Revision
The program's format allows individual users to make changes whenever they encounter problems implementing the program.

 

EX 2* (4)

 

 
           As we can see from the examples, when we use those short but extremely significant words in correct place of our sentences, they change the way how our sentences sound, they help us to make our paper smoothly and more excited. Also they undertake the role of being main component between sentences as well as paragraphs.

            In conclusion, after taking a look from the resources we had read, we have got to know how to fix those problems we have got. We know how to distinguish count and noncount nouns, and know how to avoid making all sentences looked the same. We hope you also figured it out with us, of course, if you are an international student that has the same problem with us.

References:



 

 

 

 

LEO Assignment - My Native English is not English

Knowing the difference between count and noncount nouns will help you do the following: 

- Use the noun plural ending -s correctly
·         - Use words that express quantities, such as little, much, . . .

Count vs. Noncount

The main difference between count and noncount nouns is whether or not the things they refer to can be counted.

Count nouns refer to things that can be divided up into smaller units which are separate and distinct from one another. They usually refer to what can individually be seen or heard:

Car, desk, bed, heart, book, paper, pen, mirror, finger, dancer

Noncount nouns refer to things that cannot be counted because they are regarded as wholes which cannot be divided into parts. They often refer to abstractions and occasionally have a collective meaning:

Progress, love, coolness, warmth, weather, courage, importance

Illustration: Think of the batter from which a cake is made. Before putting the batter into the oven, you cannot divide it into its parts because it is a liquid mix. Once it has been baked, however, it becomes solid enough to be cut into pieces. Think of noncount nouns as the batter which forms a mass, and think of the pieces of cake as the count nouns which may be numbered and distributed.

Pluralizing
The Rules
  • Count nouns can be pluralized by adding a final -s to the nouns.
  • Noncount nouns cannot be not pluralized at all.
This rule works for the nouns in the list of examples in the first section.

Exception: The rule needs to be slightly revised for a number of nouns. Certain nouns in English belong to both classes: they have both a noncount and a count meaning. Normally, the noncount meaning is abstract and general, and the count meaning is concrete and specific.

Compare the changes in meaning of the following nouns if they work as count or noncount nouns:

Count:
-          The researcher had to overcome some specific problems to collect the data.
-          The political arguments took the nation to a situation of political instability.
-          There were bright lights and harsh sounds.

Noncount:
-          The researcher had no problem finding studies that supported his view.
-          The author’s argument was unsupported and stereotypical.
-          Light travels faster than sound.

Special Case: A special case is the use of the mass/count distinction for the purpose of classification. The nouns which function both ways mainly denote foods and beverages: food(s), drink(s), wine(s), bread(s), coffee(s), and fruit(s).

Examples:
Units: Several types of French wines are grown in the French Riviera.
Mass: The crops of Columbia coffee are more resistant to dry climate than are the crops of Brazilian coffee.

A Revision of the Rules: The exceptions require that the rule for pluralizing be revised: count nouns and nouns used in a count sense can be pluralized; noncount nouns and nouns used in a noncount sense cannot.

Pluralizes with –s: Count Noun, Count Use
Does not Pluralize: Noncount Noun, Noncount Use



Monday, September 3, 2012

Story-in-a-box

The Inventory of 12 items

1. Money: They are some coins from China. These coins represent the year of dog from 12 Chinese Animals.
2. Chestnuts: These chestnuts are from chestnut trees in a village. They are brown, hard, and shiny. They taste sweet.
3. The Wallet: A colorful wallet with decoration. It's rectangular shaped, thin and small.
4. The Piece of cloth: It is a beautiful piece of cloth with some decoration on. It looks like a tiny Aladdin's carpet and seem to be made from wool.
5. The face: This is actually a wooden head which has a strange face with both eyes closed. The lips are painted with red. It looks a bit mystery.
6. The Ruler: A person who is the ruler of a town. He creates rules for people.
7. The plate: This is a tiny plate with the diameter of about 1.5 inches. It has colorful decoration. The plate is an American Indian product.
8. The canoe: This is a wooden canoe with bright color. Both sides of the canoe are sharp and this is a consistent canoe.
9. The Chinese stamp: It's a green gem stamp which is carved dragon pattern. It's about 2 inches height and gets a square stand.
10. The Glass Jar: This is a jar with something looks like sand inside. It's a small jar but can bring luck.
11. The Man:  He wears an outfit which is not a normal outfit. It looks like a homely dress. The man always sticks both hands together in front of his chest.
12. The Drum player: He is a street drum player. He wears a colorful outfit and his drum is even also colorful. He looks happy and can make people feel happy each time he plays the drum.
13. The Village: This is The Man's home. We can see his house with a garden and a pond in front.

The story:

The Journey of a Countryside Man


There is a man who lives in a small village. He works as a farmer year around. Everyday, he wakes up in the early morning, start working in his farm. He harvests fruits, vegetable and nuts. He also raises cow, chicken and he raises fishes in a big pond in front of his house. His life is keep going day by day without anything new. One day, he thinks to himself: “This is boring, I want something different”. He feels like he’s bored of his constant life in the village. He has never been gone anywhere outside of the village, so he feels curious about the outside world. After that, the Man decides to pack stuff and get on the way to discover the world.
In the early morning, the Man leaves his hometown by a consistent wooden canoe. He brings with him some coins which are put in a colorful small wallet. He also brings a jar which can bring luck to him, and a bag filled of chestnuts as his food. And then he starts his interesting journey by rowing the canoe along a river.
The Man rows the canoe for a day and a night. Finally he get to a town, he sees that people are walking around on the street. There are a lot of stores along the street. While the Man is looking around, suddenly there is a man appear in front of him. He is the ruler of the town. He said to the man that everybody has to be allowed by him before get into the town. The Man takes his lucky jar out from his bag and gives it to the ruler. Then he has a paper signed by the Chinese stamp states that he can get into the town.
After that, the Man walks on the street and see lots of things that he never seen in his life. The Man stops by a store that has a beautiful tiny plate that he really likes. He buys the plate by the Chinese coins he has been brought. He smiles and thinks he is going to put it in a glass box at home, so that he can see it everyday. He keeps walking and sees a drum player, this is the first time he see an entertainer like this. After he had listened to the drum sounds, the Man feels so happy surprisingly and decides to give the player some of his special coins.
The Man goes to everywhere in the town until sunset. His stomach is empty and he takes chestnuts out and eats them. After done eating, the Man keep going and meets the ruler again, the ruler gives him a piece of cloth due to the jar bringing him real luck. The piece of cloth will transfer into a carpet which can bring the Man anywhere he wants each time he says: “Let’s get on the trip”.
The sky is dark now, everybody are back to home. The man decides to come home by the carpet and end his journey after discovered lots of new things. It again takes him a night and a day to get home. The Man, after that, puts the plate that he got at the town in a glass container then goes to bed with a happy feeling.